3-13th Homework

2016-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

I disagree with it. Basically, the education in school is primary. There are many thing for us to learn in school, and teachers help us learn something. I think something we learn from school and something we learn from influences are different. In school, we can systematically learn something, which we want to do it. Of course, out of school, there are institutions like a school. And even if it is not school, we can get the knowledge from there. However, experiences by such a street or such a peer we learn from don't have a system. Although someone disagrees with me, school has more historical contents than outside. School was founded for educating the children or people who don't have a chance to learn. Nowadays, we can learn a basic thing like reading, writing for free to middle school in Korea. Even if I say like that, I don't neglect the experiences in the street or from peers. But I think the basic education is by providing from school. If you want to get more, you can find it.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! (^_^) It\'s another great day isn\'t it? Thank you very much for doing your best to answer our essay question for today. I really admire you for it. I honestly think both sources are equally important in learning. Of course, we should be careful with the things that we try to learn from our environment or from our peers because just like what you\'ve said, not everything that we learn are right or good. Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a wonderful day. I\'ll see you again on Thursday. Take care and God bless. ^^ ~Teacher C[이름] :) I disagree with it. >> CORRECT! OR >> I don\'t agree to that statement. Basically, the education in school is primary. >> CORRECT! OR >> Basically, the education we get in school is the highest form.There are many thing for us to learn in school, and teachers help us learn something. >> There are many things for us to learn in school and teachers help us learn something.I think something we learn from school and something we learn from influences are different.>> I think the things we learn from school and the things we learn from other influences are different.In school, we can systematically learn something, which we want to do it. >> In school, we can systematically learn something, which we want to do.Of course, out of school, there are institutions like a school. >> [Do you mean]: Of course, out of school/outside the school, there are institutions like academies. And even if it is not school, we can get the knowledge from there. >> And even if it is not a school, we can still get knowledge from there. However, experiences by such a street or such a peer we learn from don\'t have a system. >> However, experiences we get in the street or lessons we learn from our a peers don\'t have a system. Although someone disagrees with me, school has more historical contents than outside. >> Although others disagree with me, a school has more historical contents.School was founded for educating the children or people who don\'t have a chance to learn. >> [Do  you mean]: The purpose of a school is to educate children or other people who don\'t have a chance to learn. Nowadays, we can learn a basic thing like reading, writing for free to middle school in Korea. >> Nowadays, we can learn a basic thing like reading or writing for free in middle schools in Korea.Even if I say like that, I don\'t neglect the experiences in the street or from peers. >> Even if that is my opinion, I don\'t neglect/disregard the experiences we get in the street or from our peers.But I think the basic education is by providing from school. >> But I think the basic education is provided in the school.If you want to get more, you can find it. >> CORRECT! OR >> If you want to learn more, you can still acquire it. 

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