3.14 homework
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I think that it’s similar when they drunk a lot.
But when they drink little they are different.
Korean people drink first and eat something. But other countries they eat first and drink.
And when we play the game for drink someone, their tension is so high.
I think it has no difference when they drunk.
They can not walk correctly, and when they say I can’t understand how they speak. If one person is cry, other person cry too.
I think it is no difference when they drunk.
It is be universal common.
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I think that it’s similar when they drunk a lot.
>> I think it\'s similar when they drink a lot.
But when they drink little they are different.
>> But they are different when they drink little.
Korean people drink first and eat something.
>> Koreans drink first and then eat.
But other countries they eat first and drink.
>> In other countries, however, people eat first and then drink.
And when we play the game for drink someone, their tension is so high.
>> And when we play the game for someone to drink, their pressure is overwhelming.
I think it has no difference when they drunk.
>> I think there is no difference when they drunk.
They can not walk correctly, and when they say I can’t understand how they speak.
>> They can\'t walk properly, and the way they speak is difficult for me to understand.
If one person is cry, other person cry too.
>> When one person cries, others will follow.
I think it is no difference when they drunk.
>> I think that drinking makes no difference.
It is be universal common.
>> It\'s common all over the world.
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