3. 14 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for doing your homework. Although I was expecting you to write something related to history/historical events in the past. For example: the relationship between Korea and Japan. See you tomorrow! =)
I will not change anything from my past but if I got to know something awkward from my past and future, I will not do it again. In the society, where I should stay in for quite a long time, I should keep my distance and not argue with anyone. In my university, my classmates are 29 and we should listen to the same class for 4 years. One of my classmates has similar age with me so I tried to cut the gap between us. However, he was not sensitive person and made a serious mistake to me. He said words which isn\'t appropriate for him to tell. He didn\'t even apologize to me. I decided to ignore him then until graduation. But it\'s too difficult for me to see him everyday. When I will work, I will always be careful not to be so much close with my colleague and also my students. Too close relationship can create a problem.
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