3/14 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^ ^ Thank you for taking the time in answering your homework. I really appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
Thank you for your thoughts on this one too! ^ ^ Indeed! All of our senses are important, we must take care and keep them healthy! ^ ^
I think the most important sense in our cognitive ability is hearing ability.
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It\'s very happy to hear, see, feel by our hand.
>>It\'s wonderful to hear sounds.
Actually, all sense is very important to live and enjoy life.
>>Actually, all of our senses are important to live and enjoy life.
But, if we have a blind eye, we should just imagine this world.
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If we are deaf people, we can see the beautiful world, but it will be silent and calm.
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I heard that generally if a person can not hear, he/she can not speak.
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If we can hear we can imagine the world and speak my mind and learn many things.
>>If we can hear we can imagine the world and speak our minds and learn many things.
And she/he can communicate easily with people.
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So, I think the most important sense is hearing.
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Fortunately, I have all sense now.
>>Fortunately, I have all my senses now.
However, we don\'t know the future.
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If I will lose some ability in someday, I will realize the value of the senses.
>>If I will lose some abilities in the future, I will realize the value of the senses.
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