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2025-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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Thank you so much for your words, teacher. I went to a hotel with my family when last day of 2024 I made a reservation early and it bought affordable price.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Lily!

Wow! It\'s nice that you made plans early, so you were able to book a hotel at an affordable price because normally, prices of hotels skyrocket on holidays.

- T. Caitlyn

I went to a hotel with my family when last day of 2024
>> I went to a hotel with my family on the last day of 2024.
I made a reservation early and it bought affordable price.

>> I made a reservation early, and it had an affordable price.

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