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2015-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, my teacher~. ^^ A month ago, my youngest daughter broken her arm so she could wash her arm. Today I met doctor who is in charge of her. He said "Your daughter can wash arm from today but be careful" So I helped her to wash her arm. It was very difficult but she still need to wear a cast. [ homework ] Hey, Mr. [Name] who is my team leader. These day, our team have a lot of work to do. I like to do them but we have some problems. A few months ago, one of our team members left and one of our team members fire. So we need some new employee to do work. Also I have some strees because of a lot of work with our team members. We have to solve this situation. I want you to know it. We believe you and I will work very hard with my members. You should meet another team leader to slove it.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You are getting better everyday. Some reminders: Past Participle is the form of a verb, typically ending in -ed in English, that is used in forming perfect and passive tenses and sometimes as an adjective.   Teacher Venus^^ Hi, my teacher~. ^^ >>>CORRECTA month ago, my youngest daughter broken her arm so she could wash her arm. >>>A month ago, my youngest daughter broke her arm so she couldn\'t wash her arm. Today I met doctor who is in charge of her. >>>Today I met the doctor who is in charge of her. He said \"Your daughter can wash arm from today but be careful\" >>>He said, \"Your daughter can wash her arm from today but be careful\". So I helped her to wash her arm. >>>So I helped her wash her arm.   It was very difficult but she still need to wear a cast. >>>It was very difficult but she stills need to wear a cast. [ homework ]Hey, Mr. [Name] who is my team leader. >>>Hey, Mr. [Name]. These day, our team have a lot of work to do. >>>These days, our team has a lot of work to do. I like to do them but we have some problems. >>>CORRECT A few months ago, one of our team members left and one of our team members fire. >>>A few months ago, one of our team members left and one of our team members was fired. So we need some new employee to do work. >>>So we need new employees to work. Also I have some strees because of a lot of work with our team members. >>>Also I have some stress because of a lot of work with our team members. We have to solve this situation. >>>CORRECT I want you to know it. >>>CORRECT We believe you and I will work very hard with my members. >>>CORRECT You should meet another team leader to slove it. >>>You should meet another team leader to solve it.

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