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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, my teacher~. ^^
A month ago, my youngest daughter broken her arm so she could wash her arm.
Today I met doctor who is in charge of her.
He said "Your daughter can wash arm from today but be careful"
So I helped her to wash her arm. It was very difficult but she still need to wear a cast.
[ homework ]
Hey, Mr. [Name] who is my team leader.
These day, our team have a lot of work to do.
I like to do them but we have some problems.
A few months ago, one of our team members left and one of our team members fire.
So we need some new employee to do work.
Also I have some strees because of a lot of work with our team members.
We have to solve this situation.
I want you to know it.
We believe you and I will work very hard with my members.
You should meet another team leader to slove it.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are getting better everyday. Some reminders:
Past Participle is the form of a verb, typically ending in -ed in English, that is used in forming perfect and passive tenses and sometimes as an adjective.
Teacher Venus^^
Hi, my teacher~. ^^
>>>CORRECTA month ago, my youngest daughter broken her arm so she could wash her arm.
>>>A month ago, my youngest daughter broke her arm so she couldn\'t wash her arm.
Today I met doctor who is in charge of her.
>>>Today I met the doctor who is in charge of her.
He said \"Your daughter can wash arm from today but be careful\"
>>>He said, \"Your daughter can wash her arm from today but be careful\".
So I helped her to wash her arm.
>>>So I helped her wash her arm.
It was very difficult but she still need to wear a cast.
>>>It was very difficult but she stills need to wear a cast.
[ homework ]Hey, Mr. [Name] who is my team leader.
>>>Hey, Mr. [Name].
These day, our team have a lot of work to do.
>>>These days, our team has a lot of work to do.
I like to do them but we have some problems.
>>>CORRECT
A few months ago, one of our team members left and one of our team members fire.
>>>A few months ago, one of our team members left and one of our team members was fired.
So we need some new employee to do work.
>>>So we need new employees to work.
Also I have some strees because of a lot of work with our team members.
>>>Also I have some stress because of a lot of work with our team members.
We have to solve this situation.
>>>CORRECT
I want you to know it.
>>>CORRECT
We believe you and I will work very hard with my members.
>>>CORRECT
You should meet another team leader to slove it.
>>>You should meet another team leader to solve it.
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