3/15 homework
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In my opinion, The human should being own mobile phone.
Because our life needs using mobile phone.
If we don\'t using mobile phone, we\'ll be hard to live on.
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Hi [이름] [이름]!
Apart from this mobile also keeps us updated about the whole world. Today mobiles phone has made our life so easy for daily life activities. Today, one can assess the live traffic situation on mobile phone and take appropriate decisions to reach on time. Along with it the weather updates, booking a cab and many more.
- Kristine ^^
In my opinion, The human should being own mobile phone.
>> I believe that every human being should have a phone.
Because our life needs using mobile phone.
Because our life needs using mobile phone.
>> Because mobile phone is essential to our lives.
If we don\'t using mobile phone, we\'ll be hard to live on.
If we don\'t using mobile phone, we\'ll be hard to live on.
>> It will be difficult for us to survive if we don\'t have mobile phones.
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