3/15 homework

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If I could live anywhere for a year, I want to have living experience in the USA.

>>If I could live anywhere for a year, I want to have a living experience in the USA.
I lived in Japan for two years, and it was the first time to live abroad.

>>I lived in Japan for two years, and it was my first time to live abroad.
It was very exciting.

>>Correct 
Japan life have a similar culture with Korea due to same Asia country, but many things were quite different.

>>Japan has a similar culture with Korea since both are Asian countries, but many things are quite different too.
Feeling and experiencing a different culture was so interesting.

>>Correct 
If my student period, many friends went to western countries to study or work experience.

>>During my student years, many of my friends went to Western countries to study or to gain work experience. 
I was born in a small city in Korea, a little bit of the countryside,

>>Correct
After I enter graduate school, I realized the world is so large, because I met many foreign people in many international conferences.

>>When I entered graduate school,  I realized that the world is so large, because I met many foreign people in many international conferences.
I think the USA is the largest country where many people having the most various nationality and culture.

>>I think the USA is the largest country where population is so diverse . 
So, If I can I want to live there and want to feel the whole world is really large and I am a just one person in the world.

>>So if I can, I want to live there and feel how large/big the world is and I\'m just one of the millions of people in this world