3-15th Homework

Hello, [이름]! ^_^
Thank you very much for finding the time to write in our composition board despite your busy schedule.

I think December is the busiest month for most Koreans because of the deadlines and paperwork.

I hope you\'re doing great.

Great job in this composition. You\'ve created great sentences and your opinions were great. ^_^

I think making choices is an important of our lives.

Maybe because our choices determine who we really are.

We often want what it\'s best but at the end of the day, it\'s really about standing up for all of the decisions and choices you make that really matters.

It actually helps us grow as an individual because it teaches us to depend on our own understanding and not depend on others.

Anyhow, that\'s my opinion about it.

I\'ll see you again tomorrow.

Take care.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

In the real world, we have to choose from many options and many issues.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In reality, we have to choose from different options and issues.
When we choose something from those, we seriously select it since we may get an advantage by choosing it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When we choose something from those, we seriously consider it because we could get an advantage by choosing it.
Many people often say that they know where the truth is or what the truth is.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Many people often claim that they know where the truth is or what the truth is.
I think it is very tricky.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think it can easily confuse others.
I think nobody know the answer that is correct.

>> I think nobody knows the correct answer.
Therefore, someone compel us to choose something that he want.

>> Therefore, someone could compel us to choose something that he wants.
And then, someone say that it is the truth.

>> And then, someone would say that it is the truth.
But there are many things we can take.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> However, there are many things that we can take.
Of course, there may be the truth anywhere. 

>> Of course, there may be truth anywhere. 

OR >> Of course, truth could be found anywhere.
 But the truth might be found by us.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But we could possibly find the truth.
When we choose something, we just believe that it is true.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When we choose something, we convince ourselves that it is true.
 If we don\'t believe it, we could not do anything.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We could not do anything even if we don\'t believe it.
In the world, there are many things, and they always have a merit and fault.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There are many things in the world and they all have a merit and fault.
 If someone satisfies with my selection, someone could not agree with that.

>> [Do you mean]:  If someone is satisfied with my selection, there are others who might not agree with it.
Everybody has one\'s goal and one\'s desire when they do something.

>> Everybody has his/her own goal and desire when he/she does something.
 I think if I have to choose one of two opposite sides, I first appreciate my profit and then I will choose it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >>  I think if I have to choose one from two opposing sides, I will first consider the side that I will profit the most and then I will choose it.