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2015-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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Hello, I'm really sorry that my company has to postpone about the payment for your goods. I think you would worry about it. However, don't worring. My company has about a long history. Sometime my company spent a lot of enjoyable time, sometime my company spent a lot of trabble time. However, we solve them. Please, wait a month for the payment.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   I like it that you tried your best.  I think you misheard my corrections a while ago. Anyway, I already wrote them down for you to see. Also, be careful when you use prepositions because they can affect the meaning of the sentence.   Teacher Venus^^   Hello, I\'m really sorry that my company has to postpone about the payment for your goods. >>>Hello, I\'m really sorry that my company has to postpone the payment for your goods. I think you would worry about it. >>>I think you will worry about it. However, don\'t worring. >>>However, you don\'t need to worry. My company has about a long history. >>>My company has this history. Sometime my company spent a lot of enjoyable time, sometime my company spent a lot of trabble time. >>>Sometimes my company spends a lot of enjoyable time. Sometimes my company spends a lot of difficult time. However, we solve them. >>>However, we will solve them. Please, wait a month for the payment. >>>Please, wait for a month for the payment.

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