3.16 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
DIRECTIONS: Make a sentence using the words:
I am an only child. So there seems to be personal egoism. His personality seems to be good though. ^^
When I work, I like to talk and collaborate. Then things work better.
I feel physically weak. So exercise is necessary.
강사 첨삭
I am impressed that you made meaningful sentences, Toress. Just try to avoid starting your sentences with \'so\'. It\'s better to combine the sentences with it. Keep up the good work!-Faith-
I am an only child. So there seems to be personal egoism. >> I am an only child, so there seems to be personal egoism.
His personality seems to be good though. ^^
>> CORRECT
When I work, I like to talk and collaborate.
When I work, I like to talk and collaborate.
>> CORRECT
Then things work better.
>> Then, things work better.
I feel physically weak. So exercise is necessary.
I feel physically weak. So exercise is necessary.
>> I feel physically weak, so exercise is necessary.
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