3. 16 Homework

2018-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

** Writing Task ** - What are three important cultural norms or traditions from your cultural background? (Definition, examples). In Korea, First, People should use the honorific to adults. It's important to respect older people traditionally. But thesedays, Many people think old but rude adults don't have a right to be respected. Second, Women have more tendencies to cook and take care of babies traditionally. But thesedays, Many women have a job and they don't want to cook or take care of babies alone. Men know that they can't get marry if they're conservative. Third, People perform ancestral rites twice or more an year. But, thesedays, Many people don't do that because of their relision or lack of nessecity.

강사 첨삭

In Korea, First, People should use the honorific to adults. It\'s important to respect older people traditionally. But thesedays, Many people think old but rude adults don\'t have a right to be respected.
Second, Women have more tendencies to cook and take care of babies traditionally. But thesedays, Many women have a job and they don\'t want to cook or take care of babies alone. Men know that they can\'t get marry if they\'re conservative.
Third, People perform ancestral rites twice or more an year. But, thesedays, Many people don\'t do that because of their relision or lack of nessecity.


The first important cultural norms in our country Korea, is; people should use honorific to addressed adults. It\'s important to respect older people traditionally, but these days many people think that rude adults don\'t have the right to be respected.

Second, women have more tendencies to cook and take care of their children traditionally, however these days, many women have a job and they don\'t want to cook or take care of their children by themselves. Men know that they cannot get married if they are still conservative and living in old traditional ways.

Third, people perform ancestral rites twice or more a year, but in the 21st century many people don\'t follow this tradition because of their religion and lack of necessity.

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