3-16th Homework

Hello, [이름]!

How are you doing today?

Congratulations again for doing great in this composition. Good job!

I think the pursuit of our desire is more important than the destination.

It\'s because many people focus too much on the destination that they forget to enjoy or savor every moment.

Anyhow, this is just my opinion about it.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher C[이름]

I think we work to get pleasure and satisfaction actually.
>> I think we actually work to get pleasure and satisfaction.
 When we start to do something, we might feel the stress.
>> CORRECT!

OR >>  When we start to do something, we might feel stressed.
 Even if we don\'t feel the pressure, we seriously think about it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Though we don\'t feel the pressure, we seriously consider it.
 It\'s because no one wants to fail.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> This is because nobody wants to fail.
 I think, to achieve something is like climbing a mountain.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think, trying to achieve something is the same as climbing a mountain.
 If we want to climb the mountain, we have to go to the entrance of the mountain.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If we want to climb the mountain, we have to pass through the entrance of the mountain.
 It is easy to go to the entrance, since we go there using a car generally.

>> It is easy to go to the entrance, since we generally go there using a car.
But if you start to climb, it would be hard until you come back to the entrance.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The moment that you start to climb, it would be difficult until you come back to the entrance.
The climax during climbing the mountain is when we take a summit.

>> The climax in/when climbing the mountain is when we take/reach the summit.
At that time, we can forget all of hardness as seeing the landscape at the summit.

>> At that time, we can forget all of hardships while seeing the landscape at the summit.
It is a very good example of pleasure and satisfaction as I can show an example.

>> It is a very good example of pleasure and satisfaction.
After coming back the entrance, many people say like that.

>> After coming back at the entrance, many people would say that.
Why do I come here? I will not come again here.

>> Why do I come here? I will not come here again .
However, after several months they want to do again.

>> However, after several months they want to do it again.
It\'s because the amount of pleasure and satisfaction are very much than they thought before.

>> It\'s because the amount of pleasure and satisfaction are much more than what they thought before.