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My office has a cafeteria for employees.
So, I usually eat lunch at 12:30 pm with my co-workers at the cafeferia.
There are many Korean munus but every day the menu is different.
So, I can eat a lot of Korean food everyday.
Also it is free for employees.
I like Wednesday because Wednesday's munu is the best to me.
My favorite dish is anything with chicken.
Sometimes I go out with my team members for lunch because my team leader like to go out with lunch.
We usually go dutch.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You did great. Just remember that the conjunctions and and but can be used to join two statements.
And: shows addition and is used when the statements are similar.
I called Jan and we talked for an hour.
But: is used to connect statements that express opposite ideas.
I also called Steve, but he wasn\'t home.
Teacher Venus^^
My office has a cafeteria for employees.
>>>CORRECT
So, I usually eat lunch at 12:30 pm with my co-workers at the cafeferia.
>>>So, I usually eat lunch at 12:30 pm with my co-workers at the cafeteria.
There are many Korean munus but every day the menu is different.
>>>There are many Korean menus and every day the menu is different.
So, I can eat a lot of Korean food everyday.
>>>CORRECT
Also it is free for employees.
>>>CORRECT
I like Wednesday because Wednesday\'s munu is the best to me.
>>>I like Wednesday because Wednesday\'s menu is the best to me.
My favorite dish is anything with chicken.
>>>CORRECT
Sometimes I go out with my team members for lunch because my team leader like to go out with lunch.
>>>Sometimes I go out with my team members for lunch because my team leader likes to go out with lunch.
We usually go dutch.
>>>CORRECT
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