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2015-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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My office has a cafeteria for employees. So, I usually eat lunch at 12:30 pm with my co-workers at the cafeferia. There are many Korean munus but every day the menu is different. So, I can eat a lot of Korean food everyday. Also it is free for employees. I like Wednesday because Wednesday's munu is the best to me. My favorite dish is anything with chicken. Sometimes I go out with my team members for lunch because my team leader like to go out with lunch. We usually go dutch.

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 Hello [이름]!   You did great. Just remember that the conjunctions and and but can be used to join two statements. And: shows addition and is used when the statements are similar. I called Jan and we talked for an hour. But: is used to connect statements that express opposite ideas. I also called Steve, but he wasn\'t home.   Teacher Venus^^   My office has a cafeteria for employees. >>>CORRECT So, I usually eat lunch at 12:30 pm with my co-workers at the cafeferia. >>>So, I usually eat lunch at 12:30 pm with my co-workers at the cafeteria. There are many Korean munus but every day the menu is different. >>>There are many Korean menus and every day the menu is different. So, I can eat a lot of Korean food everyday. >>>CORRECT Also it is free for employees. >>>CORRECT I like Wednesday because Wednesday\'s munu is the best to me. >>>I like Wednesday because Wednesday\'s menu is the best to me. My favorite dish is anything with chicken. >>>CORRECT Sometimes I go out with my team members for lunch because my team leader like to go out with lunch. >>>Sometimes I go out with my team members for lunch because my team leader likes to go out with lunch. We usually go dutch. >>>CORRECT

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