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In my opinion, I think that technology is making generation gap bigger.
The stores have unmanned kiosk for liquidate. The old people feel hard because of unmanned kiosk.
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The technological generation gap exists because each generation grew up in a different technological era with different items at their fingertips. This is often forgotten when people of different generations come together. While technology is rapidly advancing, generation gaps are becoming smaller and smaller.
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In my opinion, I think that technology is making generation gap bigger.
>> I believe that technology is widening the generational gap.
The stores have unmanned kiosk for liquidate.
The stores have unmanned kiosk for liquidate.
>> Several stores already have liquidation kiosks.
The old people feel hard because of unmanned kiosk.
>> It\'s difficult for elderly people to use kiosks.
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