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I like travel with airplane. It is very complicate to go other countries. But when I arrive at the airport is very exciting. The process is too complicate, but when I enter the inside it’s feel very good.
And also airport has duty free shop. So I can shopping enough. The duty free shop has many gorgers things like a Gucci.Dior etc. And I like to buy Channl perfume. That’s reason I like to travel airport.
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Hello, Ye [이름]!
Thanks for doing your best in writing your homework and sharing your airport experience! ^^
Have a great day ahead!
-T.Jhozel
I like travel with airplane. It is very complicate to go other countries.
>> I enjoy traveling by plane. It is quite difficult to go to other countries.
But when I arrive at the airport is very exciting.
>> But it\'s really exciting when I get at the airport.
The process is too complicate, but when I enter the inside it’s feel very good.
>> The whole process is overly complicated, but it feels great once I\'m inside.
And also airport has duty free shop.
>> Also, the airport has a duty-free shop.
So I can shopping enough.
>> So I can go shopping.
The duty free shop has many gorgers things like a Gucci.Dior etc. And I like to buy Channl perfume.
>> The duty-free shop has various designer items such as Gucci, Dior, and others. I also like to buy Chanel perfume.
That’s reason I like to travel airport.
>>That is why I enjoy airport travel.
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