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Hi ma'am! Good afternoon? I am just noticed you stay in the Philippines now. Wow... Homework Are today's children and [이름] teens overly concerned with their physical appearance? Luckly,my son and daughter are born with a good physical appearance. Basically, most the teenagers get plastic surgery in Korea these days.but there are many side effects,even occur fatal accident. Now the teenagers are exposed to huge competition. I think, it is necessary to solve the competirion of teenagers by government.This is my opinion. Thank you!

Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing this homework. Kindly check ,y corrections please. Have a great day! ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon! >> CORRECT!I am just noticed you stay in the Philippines now. Wow...>> I Just found out now that you are staying/living in the Philippines. Wow!HomeworkAre today\'s children and [이름] teens overly concerned with their physical appearance?Luckly,my son and daughter are born with a good physical appearance. >> Luckily, my son and daughter were born with good physical appearances.  Basically, most the teenagers get plastic surgery in Korea these days. >> Basically, most Korean teenagers undergo plstic surgery these days. but there are many side effects,even occur fatal accident. >> But plastic surgery has many side effects and it is even fatal sometimes. Now the teenagers are exposed to huge competition. >> Now, teenagers are exposed in a world where competition is very tight. I think, it is necessary to solve the competirion of teenagers by government. >> I think it is necessary for the government to address the problem of competition among teenagers. This is my opinion.>> CORRECT!Thank you! >> CORRECT!