3.17 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! It's already Tuesday. Time flies very fast these days.
What makes someone beautiful?
Generally, girls look beautiful with wearing make-up. Donating to someone and helping others are more valuable things that make us beautiful. I think that having a good mind is the best thing what makes someone beautiful. Besides, if someone has a pretty face, it would be perfect, I guess.
Thank you! Have a wonderful day!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!
I admire your definition of beauty. I\'m sure your wife is also beautiful^^
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning! It\'s already Tuesday.
>> Correct!
Time flies very fast these days.
>> Correct!What makes someone beautiful?Generally, girls look beautiful with wearing make-up
>> Correct!
>> or: Generally, girls who wear make up look beautiful.
Donating to someone and helping others are more valuable things that make us beautiful.
>> Correct!I think that having a good mind is the best thing what makes someone beautiful.
>> I think that having a good mind is the best thing that makes someone beautiful.
Besides, if someone has a pretty face, it would be perfect, I guess.>> Correct!Thank you! Have a wonderful day!
>> Correct!
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