3-17th Homework

Hello, [이름]! ^_^

Thank you very much for doing your homework.

I think your sentences and opinions are very good.

I agree that the supply and demand of food in the world should be balanced.

But in addition to that, I think people should be more responsible of their own health instead of blaming restaurants for their unwanted weight gain.

Anyhow that is my opinion for today.

I hope your Friday is going great.

See you next week.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

I don\'t agree with that.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I don\'t agree to that opinion.
I don\'t understand why the restaurants have to responsible for the individual\'s weight gain.

>> I don\'t understand why the restaurants have to be responsible for the individual\'s weight gain.
The restaurants are not hospitals.

>> CORRECT!

OR >>A restaurants is not a hospital.
There are many restaurants to choose from, and the selection of those is responsible for a person.

>> There are many restaurants to choose from, and the selection of those is the responsibility of the person.
I think if you have a problem in your body, it is a normal situation you have to go to hospital.

>> I think if you have a problem in your body, it is a normal situation for you to go to the hospital.
Don\'t say your body condition to the restaurants.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Don\'t tell the restaurants about your body condition.
 If you say like that, it\'s very strange.

>>  If you say that, it\'s going to be very strange.
 Nowadays, a specific problem relating with food is surplus in the rich countries.

>> Nowadays, a specific problem relating with food in the rich countries is surplus.
I say a TV show several month ago.

>>  I saw a TV show several months ago.
It was very shocked to me.

>> It was very shocking to me.
In USA, after closing some restaurants, the employee threw the food into a trash bin.

>> In the USA, after some restaurants have closed, the employees threw the food into a trash bin.
It was not opened ever.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It was never discussed.

it was enormous, so that some volunteer can take it from the bins to distribute the poor.

>> It was enormous and some volunteers can take it from the bins to distribute to the poor.

I think before taking care of the individual\'s weight gain, we should responsible for the thrown food.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think before giving an individual\'s weight gain a thought, we should first be responsible for the thrown food.

Nowadays, there is an unbalance situation supplying food in the world.

>> Nowadays, there is an unbalance situation between the supply and demand of food in the world.
For example, Africans run out of food.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> To cite an example, Africans run out of food.