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I am an office worker and I am in charge of the export.
I like my job because I have to study about customs clearance. I like to learn a lot of things.
This is reason why I like my job.
When I was a student, I wanted to be a teacher.
I think many teachers have a good their job because it is important to teach someone.
I want that my children have a great their job after they grow up.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are really learning a lot. Some reminders:
The verb WANT is followed by infinitive with TOexamples:I want to go to RomeShe wants to learn SpanishEverybody wants to win
Teacher Venus^^
I am an office worker and I am in charge of the export.
>>>CORRECT
I like my job because I have to study about customs clearance.
>>>CORRECT
I like to learn a lot of things.
>>>CORRECT
This is reason why I like my job.
>>>CORRECT
When I was a student, I wanted to be a teacher.
>>>CORRECT
I think many teachers have a good their job because it is important to teach someone.>>>I think teaching is a good job because it is important to teach someone.
I want that my children have a great their job after they grow up.
>>>I want my children to have a great job when they grow up.
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