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2015-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

I am an office worker and I am in charge of the export. I like my job because I have to study about customs clearance. I like to learn a lot of things. This is reason why I like my job. When I was a student, I wanted to be a teacher. I think many teachers have a good their job because it is important to teach someone. I want that my children have a great their job after they grow up.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You are really learning a lot.  Some reminders: The verb WANT is followed by infinitive with TOexamples:I want to go to RomeShe wants to learn SpanishEverybody wants to win Teacher Venus^^   I am an office worker and I am in charge of the export. >>>CORRECT I like my job because I have to study about customs clearance. >>>CORRECT   I like to learn a lot of things. >>>CORRECT This is reason why I like my job. >>>CORRECT When I was a student, I wanted to be a teacher. >>>CORRECT I think many teachers have a good their job because it is important to teach someone.>>>I think teaching is a good job because it is important to teach someone.   I want that my children have a great their job after they grow up. >>>I want my children to have a great job when they grow up.

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