3/18 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the biggest benefit is the practicality.
Students can attend online classes anytime and anywhere if they have the willingness to study.
Occasionally, we need a systematic boundary to control ourselves, especially for teenagers.
Although many adults have low self-control abilities, many more teens can not control themselves.
That is why we go to school, educate, and meet friends to improve sociality.
I think online classes are very beneficial for adults, but not profitable for teens.
Most teenagers go to school until they graduate high school.
After then, they can choose whether or not to go to university to learn more acknowledges.
I think it is a choice, so it is not a matter of being criticized or praised for not doing it.
So, online classes are very beneficial for people who have a strong willingness to learn.
In off-line classes, we must follow the curriculum and my learning speed follow them.
However, in online classes, we can control the learning speed and range ourselves
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thanks for the response as always. It is great reading your responses because you explain your thoughts well.
-Rachel
I think the biggest benefit is the practicality. Students can attend online classes anytime and anywhere if they have the willingness to study.
>> correct
Occasionally, we need a systematic boundary to control ourselves, especially for teenagers. Although many adults have low self-control abilities, many more teens can not control themselves.
>> correct
That is why we go to school, educate, and meet friends to improve sociality.
>> That is why we go to school to be educated, and meet friends to improve our social awareness.
I think online classes are very beneficial for adults, but not profitable for teens. Most teenagers go to school until they graduate high school.
I think online classes are very beneficial for adults, but not profitable for teens. Most teenagers go to school until they graduate high school.
>> correct
After then, they can choose whether or not to go to university to learn more knowledge.
After then, they can choose whether or not to go to university to learn more knowledge.
>> correct (we say knowledge though and not acknowledge)
I think it is a choice, so it is not a matter of being criticized or praised for not doing it. So, online classes are very beneficial for people who have a strong willingness to learn.
I think it is a choice, so it is not a matter of being criticized or praised for not doing it. So, online classes are very beneficial for people who have a strong willingness to learn.
>> correct
In off-line classes, we must follow the curriculum and my learning speed follow them. However, in online classes, we can control the learning speed and range ourselves.
In off-line classes, we must follow the curriculum and my learning speed follow them. However, in online classes, we can control the learning speed and range ourselves.
>> correct
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