3-18th Homework

Hi, [이름]!

First of all, I would like to thank you for creating excellent sentences and giving good answers. ^__^

I absolutely agree when you said adaptation is the best skill a person could have.

This is because changes happen constantly and I honestly believe that change is the only permanent thing in this world.

The ability to adapt is a must.

Otherwise, you will suffer great consequences.

Resistance to change will not bring any benefit.

I think growth and improvement take place when we respond well to the changes around us.

Anyhow, that is my point-of-view in relation to this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great. ^^

~Teacher C[이름] :)

If we get along with someone or if we live somewhere, we would face a new environment.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If we have to live with someone or if we have to live somewhere, we would have to face a new environment.
Often, we must relocate or we have to move company.

>> Often, we must relocate or we have to move to another company.
There is no way to keep the current state.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There is no way that you could keep your current state a secret.
All of the world always change without our recognition.

>> [Do you mean]: All things in the world always change without our recognition.
So, If you want to get along with your neighborhood, you have to continuously adapt you to new environment.

>> So, if you want to get along with your neighbor, you have to continuously adapt to your new environment.
Nowadays, there are many technical development, for example, a smart phone, SNS.

>> Nowadays, there are many technical developments; for example, smart phones and SNS.

OR >> There are many technical developments nowadays. Some of the examples are the smart phones and SNS.
Of course, if you want to use those, it\'s OK.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Of course, it\'s alright to use them.
I don\'t use SNS too. But I use the smart phone.

>>  CORRECT!

R >>  I don\'t use SNS too but I use the smart phone.
 Human beings cannot live alone.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Humans are incapable of living on their own.
I think if humans didn\'t adapt their thought or their behaviors to new environment, they may be an extinct species.

>> [Do you mean]: I think if humans didn\'t adapt to their new environment, adjust their thoughts and behaviors, they would be an extinct specie now.

Our ancestor adapted their body to the cold, finally they remained.

>> Our ancestors adapted to the cold temperature and finally, they remained.
I think the most powerful ability of human is the adaption.

>> I think the most powerful ability of a human is adaptation.

 Human has a big brain and has two hands that could deal with tools.

>> A  human has a big brain and has two hands that could deal with tools.
So, it is very important skill and ability to survive in the new environment.

>> So, it is a very important skill and ability to survive in the new environment.
Anyway, the change always happens and we just live in.

>>  Anyway, the change always happens and we just need to adapt.