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2015-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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Hello. This is my first time to visit this hotel. I was invited last month for the business meeting. However I think I am lost. Could I ask you something? Could you give me directions on how to go to the conference room? It will beto give me the help. After the meeting, I want to in this city. So Could I have a reservation now? Thank you. I can have a nice time thanks to you.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   I knew you could do this. Just make sure that your sentences are complete. I want to in this city. (It is incomplete) I want to go sightseeing in this city. (It is complete)   Teacher Venus^^   Hello. >>>CORRECT This is my first time to visit this hotel. >>>CORRECT I was invited last month for the business meeting. >>>CORRECT However I think I am lost. >>>CORRECT Could I ask you something? >>>CORRECT Could you give me directions on how to go to the conference room? >>>CORRECT It will beto give me the help. >>>It will really help me a lot. After the meeting, I want to in this city. >>>After the meeting, I want to go sightseeing in this city. So Could I have a reservation now? >>>So could I have a reservation now? Thank you. >>>CORRECT I can have a nice time thanks to you. >>>CORRECT

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