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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello.
This is my first time to visit this hotel.
I was invited last month for the business meeting.
However I think I am lost.
Could I ask you something?
Could you give me directions on how to go to the conference room?
It will beto give me the help.
After the meeting, I want to in this city.
So Could I have a reservation now?
Thank you.
I can have a nice time thanks to you.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I knew you could do this. Just make sure that your sentences are complete.
I want to in this city. (It is incomplete)
I want to go sightseeing in this city. (It is complete)
Teacher Venus^^
Hello.
>>>CORRECT
This is my first time to visit this hotel.
>>>CORRECT
I was invited last month for the business meeting.
>>>CORRECT
However I think I am lost.
>>>CORRECT
Could I ask you something?
>>>CORRECT
Could you give me directions on how to go to the conference room?
>>>CORRECT
It will beto give me the help.
>>>It will really help me a lot.
After the meeting, I want to in this city.
>>>After the meeting, I want to go sightseeing in this city.
So Could I have a reservation now?
>>>So could I have a reservation now?
Thank you.
>>>CORRECT
I can have a nice time thanks to you.
>>>CORRECT
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