3.19 Homework

2014-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi ma'am! Good morning! It's a new nice day. Have a good time. Homework What was your the most important technological discovery in the history of man? Dfend your answer. I think, the most important invention in the history of man is electric power. I don't know what to live ,if it were not for electric power.What a convenient it is! I admire Edison and I always appreciate it's usability to him. I beg ask you to teach speaking English for my son. I beleive you. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]!!! I agree with you that this is a beautiful and nice day. Anyway, thank you for consistently doing the homeworks I give you. And don\'t worry about your son, I will do my best to help him develop his English skills. Take care and have fun. ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good morning! It\'s a new nice day. Have a good time.>> CORRECT!!!HomeworkWhat was your the most important technological discovery in the history of man?Dfend your answer.I think, the most important invention in the history of man is electric power. >> I think, the most important invention in the history of man was electricity. I don\'t know what to live ,if it were not for electric power. >> I don\'t know what to do if there is no electricity. What a convenient it is! >> What a convenience it is!I admire Edison and I always appreciate it\'s usability to him. >> I admire Thomas Edison and I always appreciate his talent and skill.I beg ask you to teach speaking English for my son. >> I beg you to teach my son how to speak English.  I beleive you.>> CORRECT!!!*** believe Thank you! >> CORRECT!!!

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