3.19 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! I just had lunch as usual. I hope that you have nice lunch with your coworkers.
Have you been to a party in another country? Was it different to parties in your country?
Yes. I have been to a party in china last year. It was a kind of business party. They prefer throwing a buffet party in another country, but Koreans like their traditional styled party.
Most [이름] people like buffet party in Korea these days. I think that tastes are getting changed gradually. My son Donghyun really like throwing and attending a party.
I like a person who is outgoing and sociable.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!
I\'m glad that you had lunch already. I usually eat lunch after work. Anyway, thank you for sharing your thoughts about our topic. Have a safe day!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.
I just had lunch as usual.
>> Correct.
I hope that you have nice lunch with your coworkers.>> I hope that you have a nice lunch with your co-workers.Have you been to a party in another country? Was it different to parties in your country?Yes. I have been to a party in china last year.
>> Correct.
** China
It was a kind of business party.
>> Correct.
They prefer throwing a buffet party in another country, but Koreans like their traditional styled party.
>> They prefer throwing a buffet party in other countries, but Koreans like traditional style party.Most [이름] people like buffet party in Korea these days.
>> These days, most [이름] people like going to a buffet party in Korea.
I think that tastes are getting changed gradually.
>> I think that the trend is gradually changing.
My son Donghyun really like throwing and attending a party.
>> My son Donghyun really likes throwing and attending a party.I like a person who is outgoing and sociable.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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