3.19 Homework

2015-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! I just had lunch as usual. I hope that you have nice lunch with your coworkers. Have you been to a party in another country? Was it different to parties in your country? Yes. I have been to a party in china last year. It was a kind of business party. They prefer throwing a buffet party in another country, but Koreans like their traditional styled party. Most [이름] people like buffet party in Korea these days. I think that tastes are getting changed gradually. My son Donghyun really like throwing and attending a party. I like a person who is outgoing and sociable. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]! I\'m glad that you had lunch already. I usually eat lunch after work. Anyway, thank you for sharing your thoughts about our topic. Have a safe day! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct. I just had lunch as usual. >> Correct. I hope that you have nice lunch with your coworkers.>> I hope that you have a nice lunch with your co-workers.Have you been to a party in another country? Was it different to parties in your country?Yes. I have been to a party in china last year. >> Correct. ** China It was a kind of business party. >> Correct. They prefer throwing a buffet party in another country, but Koreans like their traditional styled party. >> They prefer throwing a buffet party in other countries, but Koreans like traditional style party.Most [이름] people like buffet party in Korea these days. >> These days, most [이름] people like going to a buffet party in Korea.   I think that tastes are getting changed gradually. >> I think that the trend is gradually changing. My son Donghyun really like throwing and attending a party. >> My son Donghyun really likes throwing and attending a party.I like a person who is outgoing and sociable. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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