3. 19 Homework

2018-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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** Writing Task ** - Some countries encourage teenagers to have part time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views. Every teenagers have different family backgrounds. Even though studying is important for teenagers, living is more important. If they're not able to live without part time job because of poverty, they should do it. If countries want to make all teenagers study only, they should give much money teenagers who are very poor for a living.

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Every teenagers have different family backgrounds. Even though studying is important for teenagers, living is more important. If they\'re not able to live without part time job because of poverty, they should do it. If countries want to make all teenagers study only, they should give much money teenagers who are very poor for a living.

My opinion depends on the situation. Every teenagers have different family backgrounds. Even though studying is important to all, living is much more important. If they\'re not able to live without part time jobs because of poverty, they must do it. If countries want to make all teenagers study only, they should give much money to teenagers who are very poor.

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