3/19 homework

Hi [이름]! Thanks for your homework and for your thoughts on this homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^

You gave wonderful insight on this one. It\'s more of embracing what we are and who we are. As a woman, we all have our advantages and disadvantages of being one. But focusing on the advantage, like what you are doing in your field is I guess the best way to achieve what we want in life. It\'s not a matter of being a male or a female! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

When I make up by myself and have a happy time with my husband, usually I like that I am a woman.

>>I usually like that I\'m a woman when I put on make up and have a happy time with my husband.
In Korea, sometimes there are woman benefits nowadays.

>>Now a days in Korea, women are given more benefits.
Some discounts in theater or shopping mall are for women, and some job is opened for only women.

>>Some discounts in theater or shopping mall are for women, and some jobs are only open for women. 
In the university or research institute, the additional score is added for women candidate or I saw some professor job offer was opened for only women to increase women professor in especially science or engineering department.

>>In the university or research institute, additional scores are added to women candidates or I saw some teaching jobs they offer are only open to women to increase the number of women professors especially in the science or engineering department.
Some men strongly oppose about this social supporting.

>>Some men strongly oppose this social support.
However, I think it is necessary to encourage and make equality between woman and man, from the unfair social system by the past.

>>However, I think it is necessary to encourage and make equality between women and men, by the unfair social system from the past.
The men researcher is common in my study field because my field is engineering.

>>Men researchers are common in my department since my field is engineering. 
So, when I attend a seminar or conference and present my research, often I receive attention.

>>So, when I attend a seminar or a conference and present my research, I often receive the attention that I need. 
I think this is an advantage as a woman, if I can present or study well, I come into the spotlight relatively easily.

>>I think this is an advantage as a woman, if I can present or study well, I can get into the spotlight relatively easy.