3/19 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Computers only did it what humans ordered, however now, they are learning by itself.
We\'ll find an excellent balance for human society with them since we have to find it to prevent competition with them.
The obvious fact is that maybe we\'ll be liberated from physical labor as passing it robots and our brain will start working.
Although many smart people are working with their brains now, most people are still physically working.
We can\'t overcome the intelligence, accuracy, scientific estimation of the computer.
Even if it can predict humans\' behavior based on data, the human is a very weird species.
Therefore, we will improve human\'s unsettled emotions, inconsistency, imagination, and creativity abilities.
And these are a different aspect of the computer.
I heard that even if AI can mimic the painter\'s style, it can not be Picasso, because his style is absolutely different in childhood and adulthood.
Besides, his style became more like a child as he got older, it\'s not theoretical.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thanks for the discussion and for bringing up the topic this morning. Now I have to fully understand your thoughts about AI; thus, I gave you this homework:) Thanks for the response.
-Rachel
Computers only did it what humans ordered, however now, they are learning by itself.
>> Computers and robots only did what humans programmed them to do, but now they are learning by themselves.
We\'ll find an excellent balance for human society with them since we have to find it to prevent competition with them.
We\'ll find an excellent balance for human society with them since we have to find it to prevent competition with them.
>> We\'\'ll find an excellent balance for humans to co-exist with them since we want to prevent competition with them.
The obvious fact is that maybe we\'ll be liberated from physical labor as passing it robots and our brain will start working.
The obvious fact is that maybe we\'ll be liberated from physical labor as passing it robots and our brain will start working.
>> The obvious fact is that maybe we\'ll be liberated from physical labor as passing it to robots will help our brain to function well. Although many smart people are working with their brains now, most people are still physically working.
We can\'t overcome the intelligence, accuracy, scientific estimation of the computer. Even if it can predict humans\' behavior based on data, the human is a very weird species.
Therefore, we will improve human\'s unsettled emotions, inconsistency, imagination, and creativity abilities. And these are a different aspects of the computer.
We can\'t overcome the intelligence, accuracy, scientific estimation of the computer. Even if it can predict humans\' behavior based on data, the human is a very weird species.
Therefore, we will improve human\'s unsettled emotions, inconsistency, imagination, and creativity abilities. And these are a different aspects of the computer.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
I heard that even if AI can mimic the painter\'s style, it can not be Picasso, because his style is absolutely different in childhood and adulthood.
Besides, his style became more like a child as he got older, it\'s not theoretical.
I heard that even if AI can mimic the painter\'s style, it can not be Picasso, because his style is absolutely different in childhood and adulthood.
Besides, his style became more like a child as he got older, it\'s not theoretical.
>> correct
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