3-1st Homework

Basically, I agree with that. Korea society is very competitive and very speedy. So many people are anxious about leaving alone and they think if they don't catch up with the competitive pace, they would become a looser. Therefore, they always want to keep their pace. In Korea, the competitive pace start from the birth. It's very gloomy. We are always required to go more ahead that others even if he or she is a kid. Many parents worry that their kids are lagging from others. This process continues until they die, if I sadly say. When we enter a college, and after graduating we have to enter a company that is better than other enters. In this process, there are serious competitive to enter the good company. But it is not the end of the competitive process. Even if we enter the company, we will face with the competitive situation that is with co-workers. I think in working there must be the cooperation each other. Anyway, to live in Korea is the series of the competitive.

Hello, [이름]! ^_^ How are you doing so far? Thank you very much for promptly doing your homework. I think you are a very honest person and you are not afraid to voice out your opinions. It\'s sad to know that most people in your country think that life is a race. In reality, it\'s not. But because many of you out there are taught that way, people find it very difficult to cope and survive. I think I won\'t last too long if I go there. Although it\'s natural to compete with others, competing too much is not healthy or good. It can affect a person\'s way of thinking and could also affect his/her health. Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day. See you again on Thursday. :) ~Teacher C[이름] Basically, I agree with that. >> CORRECT! OR >> I agree with that opinion. Korea society is very competitive and very speedy. >> The Korean society is very competitive and very speedy. OR >> The competition in the Korean society is very strong and we also live in a fast-paced life. So many people are anxious about leaving alone and they think if they don\'t catch up with the competitive pace, they would become a looser. >> So many people are anxious about living alone and they think that if they don\'t catch up with the competitive pace, they would become a loser. Therefore, they always want to keep their pace. >> CORRECT! OR >> Because of that, they always want to keep their pace. In Korea, the competitive pace start from the birth. >> In Korea, the competitive pace starts from birth. It\'s very gloomy. >> CORRECT! OR >> This brings about a gloomy feeling. We are always required to go more ahead that others even if he or she is a kid. >> We always require our child to be ahead of others even if he or she is just a kid. Many parents worry that their kids are lagging from others. >> CORRECT! OR >> Many parents worry that their kids are falling behind from others. This process continues until they die, if I sadly say. >> CORRECT! OR >> If I may say, this process continues until the day they perish. When we enter a college, and after graduating we have to enter a company that is better than other enters. >> When we enter college and after graduating, we have to enter a company that is better than what others enter to. In this process, there are serious competitive to enter the good company. >> In this process, there is a serious competition to enter a/the good company. But it is not the end of the competitive process. >> CORRECT! OR >> However, the competitive process does not end here. Even if we enter the company, we will face with the competitive situation that is with co-workers. >> Even if we manage to enter the company that we want, we will still face a competitive situation with our co-workers. I think in working there must be the cooperation each other. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: I think at work, there should be cooperation with each other. Anyway, to live in Korea is the series of the competitive. >> Anyway, life in Korea is composed of a series of competitions.