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My greatest worst moment is when my father sick All of a sudden my father was sick because his lung is suffered from disease This disease is Pneumothorax as a English. Because of happened I had a hard time overcoming the facts Althought he absolutely fine now. At that time I was high school student I prepared for university enterance examination. Even if he was in the hospital just only one month. I realized many things and I resolved, too Now,I appriciate what I have After I undergo it, I become strong like a rock!

Happy Friday Miss [이름]!^^   Thank you for sending me your composition.^^ How are you feeling? Yes, the obstacles passing your way will either make you or break you. I believe that if you take those things positively, you can become as strong as a rock.^^ And prayer and humbling ourselves to God can bring about impossible things to happen. Let\'s continuously pray together for your success. I\'lls ee you later.   As for your composition, I can understand your idea, but please be careful with spellings and word orders Miss [이름]. I hope you won\'t feel bad about this.    Enjoy your time for now Miss [이름].See you^^   My greatest worst moment is when my father sick >> My worst moment was when my father was sick. All of a sudden my father was sick because his lung is suffered from disease>> All of a sudden, my father was sick because of lung disease.   This disease is Pneumothorax as a English. >> This disease is Pneomothorax in English.  Because of happened I had a hard time overcoming the facts >> Because of what happened, I had a hard time overcoming this fact.  Althought he absolutely fine now. At that time I was high school student >> He is absolutely fine now. At that time, I was a high school student. I prepared for university enterance examination.>> I prepared for university entrance examination.  Even if he was in the hospital just only one month. I realized many things and I resolved, too>> Even if he was in the hospital for just one month, I realized many things and I resolved them too.  Now,I appriciate what I have >> Now, I appreciate what I have.   After I undergo it, I become strong like a rock! >>  Correct!^^