3.2 Homework

2015-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! I decided to work harder learning English than last month. I need your help, please. What is the most inspiring book you have ever read? The most inspiring book that I have ever read is a Suhoji published from China. The story is loyalties of the 108 heroes. They had special loyalties each other. I was inspired by the minds of their excluding an injustice. They always had a heart to help some person who suffering from any difficulties. I really respect that kind of hearts. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your homework. That book is really insipiring. It taught us how to be selfless. Good choice! Anyway, I am happy that you are so determined in learning English harder. I will support you all the way! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct. I decided to work harder learning English than last month. >> This month, I decided to work harder in learning English. I need your help, please. >> Correct.What is the most inspiring book you have ever read?The most inspiring book that I have ever read is a Suhoji published from China. >> The most inspiring book that I have ever read is A Suhoji which was published in China. The story is loyalties of the 108 heroes. >> The story is about the loyalty of  108 heroes. They had special loyalties each other. >> They had a special loyalty to each other. I was inspired by the minds of their excluding an injustice. >> I was inspired because they stood up courageously against injustice.   They always had a heart to help some person who suffering from any difficulties. >> They always had a heart to help somebdy who was suffering from difficulties. I really respect that kind of hearts.>> I really respect that characteristic.Thank you! >> Correct.

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