3.2 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! I decided to work harder learning English than last month. I need your help, please.
What is the most inspiring book you have ever read?
The most inspiring book that I have ever read is a Suhoji published from China. The story is loyalties of the 108 heroes. They had special loyalties each other. I was inspired by the minds of their excluding an injustice. They always had a heart to help some person who suffering from any difficulties. I really respect that kind of hearts.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for your homework. That book is really insipiring. It taught us how to be selfless. Good choice!
Anyway, I am happy that you are so determined in learning English harder. I will support you all the way!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.
I decided to work harder learning English than last month.
>> This month, I decided to work harder in learning English.
I need your help, please.
>> Correct.What is the most inspiring book you have ever read?The most inspiring book that I have ever read is a Suhoji published from China.
>> The most inspiring book that I have ever read is A Suhoji which was published in China.
The story is loyalties of the 108 heroes.
>> The story is about the loyalty of 108 heroes.
They had special loyalties each other.
>> They had a special loyalty to each other.
I was inspired by the minds of their excluding an injustice.
>> I was inspired because they stood up courageously against injustice.
They always had a heart to help some person who suffering from any difficulties.
>> They always had a heart to help somebdy who was suffering from difficulties.
I really respect that kind of hearts.>> I really respect that characteristic.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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