3. 2 Homework

2018-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

Homework: ESSAY TYPE ** What do you think is your purpose in this world? ** I think the purpose of human's life is to feel and achieve self-realization. People can do it from their jobs or their children. I think the purpose of animals including human being is to survive and to make their offsprings. I don't have any religion so I don't know the God's existance or intenton. But in my opinion, nothing in this world can be exist forever so the purpose in this world is maybe to stay well when someting is existed in some period.

강사 첨삭

I think the purpose of human\'s life is to feel and achieve self-realization. People can do it from their jobs or their children. I think the purpose of animals including human being is to survive and to make their offsprings. I don\'t have any religion so I don\'t know the God\'s existance or intenton. But in my opinion, nothing in this world can be exist forever so the purpose in this world is maybe to stay well when someting is existed in some period.


I think the purpose of human\'s life is to feel and achieve self realization. People can do it by from their jobs or their children. I think the purpose of animals/ human being/ including myself is to survive and to make their off spring. I don\'t have any religion so I do not know the God\'s existence, plans or intentions. But in my opinion, nothing in this world can exist forever, so the purpose in this world is probably to stay well when something/someone existed in a period of time.

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