3.20 Homework

2014-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good afternoon? I had a meeting with the German customer for two hours this morning. It was very excited. The conversation was comfortable and fun.I can converse in English confidently and easily. I found that I could feel a confidence in English. Thank you... Homework Does someone really need a high school diploma or college degree to be successful today? Yes. I think we need diploma or college degree. We can learn the basic of success in our school. and in there, we can also learn public etiquette. I think it is very important process to be a successful person in Korea. And I regret why I hadn't more work hard at that times. Thank you!

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Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! I\'m so happy because you are more confident in speaking the English langauge now. I told you, practice makes perfect. So keep on pushing yourself in learning so you will become more fluent. Keep it up! ~KELLY~ Hi there! Good afternoon? >> Correct. I had a meeting with the German customer for two hours this morning. >> I had a meeting with a German customer for two hours this morning. It was very excited. >> It was very exciting. The conversation was comfortable and fun. >> Correct. I can converse in English confidently and easily. >> Correct. I found that I could feel a confidence in English. >> I relaized that I could feel confident in English. >> I realized that I am confident in using the English language. Thank you...>> Correct.HomeworkDoes someone really need a high school diploma or college degree to be successful today?Yes. >> Correct.I think we need diploma or college degree. >> I think we need a diploma or a college degree. We can learn the basic of success in our school. >> We can learn the basic to succed in the school. and in there, we can also learn public etiquette. >> Correct.I think it is very important process to be a successful person in Korea. >> I think it is a very important process to be a successful person in Korea.And I regret why I hadn\'t more work hard at that times. >> And I regret because I did not work harder at that time.Thank you! >> Correct.

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