3.20 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good afternoon? I had a meeting with the German customer for two hours this morning. It was very excited. The conversation was comfortable and fun.I can converse in English confidently and easily. I found that I could feel a confidence in English. Thank you...
Homework
Does someone really need a high school diploma or college degree to be successful today?
Yes.
I think we need diploma or college degree. We can learn the basic of success in our school. and in there, we can also learn public etiquette. I think it is very important process to be a successful person in Korea.
And I regret why I hadn't more work hard at that times.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! I\'m so happy because you are more confident in speaking the English langauge now. I told you, practice makes perfect. So keep on pushing yourself in learning so you will become more fluent. Keep it up!
~KELLY~
Hi there! Good afternoon?
>> Correct.
I had a meeting with the German customer for two hours this morning.
>> I had a meeting with a German customer for two hours this morning.
It was very excited.
>> It was very exciting.
The conversation was comfortable and fun.
>> Correct.
I can converse in English confidently and easily.
>> Correct.
I found that I could feel a confidence in English.
>> I relaized that I could feel confident in English.
>> I realized that I am confident in using the English language.
Thank you...>> Correct.HomeworkDoes someone really need a high school diploma or college degree to be successful today?Yes.
>> Correct.I think we need diploma or college degree.
>> I think we need a diploma or a college degree.
We can learn the basic of success in our school.
>> We can learn the basic to succed in the school.
and in there, we can also learn public etiquette.
>> Correct.I think it is very important process to be a successful person in Korea.
>> I think it is a very important process to be a successful person in Korea.And I regret why I hadn\'t more work hard at that times. >> And I regret because I did not work harder at that time.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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