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2018-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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[a time when I felt proud of myself] I am a researcher in the department of energy engineering. I do experiments and study about the my research everyday. Many people ask me why you like study even after high school. The meaning of the study what they saying and what I saying is different. To me, study or research are curiosity and enjoyment to find out new phenomenon. I also don't like to do study for exam. hahaha. When I find new phenomenon or new material, I am happy and feel proud of my achievement. Now, I am on the step to stuck my skill and knowledge, because I am still young researcher. In the future, however, I want to find many important things to help human.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Wow! You accomplished your homework immediately.

Thanks a lot. See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


[a time when I felt proud of myself]

I am a researcher in the department of energy engineering.

>>> Correct!
 I do experiments and study about the my research everyday. 

>>> I do experiments and study about my research every day.
 Many people ask me why you like study even after high school. 

>>> Many people ask me why I still like to study even after high school
 The meaning of the study what they saying and what I saying is different. 

>>> The study they were talking about is different from I was referring to.
 To me, study or research are curiosity and enjoyment to find out new phenomenon.

>>> To me, study or research is just a way to find out about a new phenomenon while enjoying.
 I also don\'t like to do study for exam. hahaha.

>>> I also don\'t like to study for exams. Hahaha!
 When I find new phenomenon or new material, I am happy and feel proud of my achievement.

>>> When I find a new phenomenon or material, I feel happy and proud of my achievement.
 Now, I am on the step to stuck my skill and knowledge, because I am still young researcher. 

>>> Now, I am still on the process of gaining more knowledge and improving my skills because I\'m still a young researcher.
 In the future, however, I want to find many important things to help human.

>>> In the future, however, I want to find many important things to help humans.

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