3/20 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Shanee^^,
[a time when I felt proud of myself]
I am a researcher in the department of energy engineering.
>>> Correct!
I do experiments and study about the my research everyday.
>>> I do experiments and study about my research every day.
Many people ask me why you like study even after high school.
>>> Many people ask me why I still like to study even after high school
The meaning of the study what they saying and what I saying is different.
>>> The study they were talking about is different from I was referring to.
To me, study or research are curiosity and enjoyment to find out new phenomenon.
>>> To me, study or research is just a way to find out about a new phenomenon while enjoying.
I also don\'t like to do study for exam. hahaha.
>>> I also don\'t like to study for exams. Hahaha!
When I find new phenomenon or new material, I am happy and feel proud of my achievement.
>>> When I find a new phenomenon or material, I feel happy and proud of my achievement.
Now, I am on the step to stuck my skill and knowledge, because I am still young researcher.
>>> Now, I am still on the process of gaining more knowledge and improving my skills because I\'m still a young researcher.
In the future, however, I want to find many important things to help human.
>>> In the future, however, I want to find many important things to help humans.
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