3/20 homework
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We can restore the relationship anytime if we have courage and consideration because it\'s eternal.
Just we know how can we start.
Many relationships between parent and child start to estrange from the child\'s adolescence.
Children say frankly their opinion, and sometimes it is very rude and too much.
They like more their friends than family, so many parents think their children have a problem.
They are increasingly unable to understand each other.
However, it is not mean that they do not love each other.
In most cases, parents love their children infinitely, and they just wait for them until they open the mind and come.
It is very difficult to start talking about the beginning of why the relationship was damaged.
It can be a slip of the tongue or action, and sometimes it can be a little smaller than your expectation.
However, unfortunately, there are exceptions.
I know some relationship is completely broken.
Nevertheless, I think they should just understand them and have to let them go
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thanks as always for the prompt reply to the message you were given:) Your ideas are always insightful and interesting.
-Rachel
We can restore the relationship anytime if we have courage and consideration because it\'s eternal.
>> correct
Just we know how can we start.
Just we know how can we start.
>> We just have to know how to start.
Many relationships between parent and child start to estrange from the child\'s adolescence.
Many relationships between parent and child start to estrange from the child\'s adolescence.
>> Many relationships between parents and children get estranged or turn sour when the child becomes an adolescent.
Children say frankly their opinion, and sometimes it is very rude and too much.
Children say frankly their opinion, and sometimes it is very rude and too much.
>> Teens usually state their opinions or ideas frankly and sometimes it is rude or disrespectful.
They like more their friends than family, so many parents think their children have a problem.
They like more their friends than family, so many parents think their children have a problem.
>> correct
They are increasingly unable to understand each other.
They are increasingly unable to understand each other.
>> correct (awesome sentence)
However, it is not mean that they do not love each other.
However, it is not mean that they do not love each other.
>> However, it does not mean that they don\'t love each other.
In most cases, parents love their children infinitely, and they just wait for them until they open the mind and come.
In most cases, parents love their children infinitely, and they just wait for them until they open the mind and come.
>> correct ( we can also use return instead of come)
It is very difficult to start talking about the beginning of why the relationship was damaged. It can be a slip of the tongue or action, and sometimes it can be a little smaller than your expectation.
It is very difficult to start talking about the beginning of why the relationship was damaged. It can be a slip of the tongue or action, and sometimes it can be a little smaller than your expectation.
>> correct
However, unfortunately, there are exceptions. I know some relationship is completely broken.
However, unfortunately, there are exceptions. I know some relationship is completely broken.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
Nevertheless, I think they should just understand them and have to let them go.
Nevertheless, I think they should just understand them and have to let them go.
>> correct (perfect
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