3-20th Homework

2016-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

Sometimes, people say that they don't know their mind. I think it is because they don't fully understand themselves. Whenever we do something to achieve, we first think about some advantage taken by the behavior. If we think that we cannot take any profit in there, we just give up. But there are some advantages in there, we start to consider that. In this case, some others around you may not understand you. If they never think about it or if they never face with the situation, they don't know why you seriously consider it. However, some friend has an experience like you, the person may understand you and your situation. So, I think we need other people in order to understand ourselves. In first, we don't understand and we just fight with someone, it's because each other misunderstand. After facing a specific situation, we can easily understand others. I think understanding other people is like to understand me. If you see the other's behavior,you can catch your attitude against others.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday [이름]! (^_^)

I hope your day is going great.

Thank you very much for writing an essay in our composition board.

I loved reading your insights.

I also agree that sometimes, we need other people to truly understand who we are.

We could learn from them or we could get the lesson from their own mistakes or failures.

Sometimes, the people we chose to spend our time with could also determine who we truly are.

If we go with people with a positive way of thinking, chances are, we are also a positive kind of person.

I remembered the saying: \"birds of the same feather, flock together\".

Anyhow, I\'ll see you again next week.

Take care always.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

Sometimes, people say that they don\'t know their mind.

>> [Do you mean]: Sometimes, people say that they don\'t know what to say.
I think it is because they don\'t fully understand themselves.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think it is because they don\'t really know who they are.
Whenever we do something to achieve, we first think about some advantage taken by the behavior.

>> Whenever we do something to achieve our goal, we first think about some advantages that we could gain from this behavior.
If we think that we cannot take any profit in there, we just give up.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If we think that we cannot benefit from it, we just give up.
But there are some advantages in there, we start to consider that.

>> But if there are some advantages in there, we start to consider that.
In this case, some others around you may not understand you.

>> In this case, others around you may not understand you.
If they never think about it or if they never face with the situation, they don\'t know why you seriously consider it.

>> [Do you mean]: If they have never thought about it or if they have never faced that kind of situation, they will not know why you seriously consider it.
However, some friend has an experience like you, the person may understand you and your situation.

>> However, if you have a friend who has the same experience, he/she may understand you and your situation.
So, I think we need other people in order to understand ourselves.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In my opinion, we need other people in order to understand ourselves.
In first, we don\'t understand and we just fight with someone, it\'s because each other misunderstand.

>> At first, we don\'t understand and we just fight with someone. It\'s because we misunderstand each other.
After facing a specific situation, we can easily understand others.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> After facing a certain situation, it is easier for us to understand others.
I think understanding other people is like to understand me.

>> I think understanding other people is like understanding myself.
If you see the other\'s behavior,you can catch your attitude against others.

>> If you see the other\'s behavior, you can notice your attitude against others.

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