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2015-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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Hello. I want to buy a new TV set. A few days ago, I had a time to do window shopping but I didn't know about brands of TV's very well. So can you explain about the brands of TV's to me? Also I want to buy the new TV set with cash. If I buy it with the cash, can you discount? If you can't give the discount, I will buy with credit card. I am living in the countryside so can you carry it to my house? This is last my question. When you install them in my house, do you have extra charge?

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  Hello [이름]!   You are really improving. I understand that it\'s hard for you to construct questions. I came across a helpful website. Check this out:  http://web2.uvcs.uvic.ca/elc/studyzone/200/grammar/quest.htm   Teacher Venus^^   Hello. >>>CORRECT I want to buy a new TV set. >>>CORRECT A few days ago, I had a time to do window shopping but I didn\'t know about brands of TV\'s very well. >>>A few days ago, I had the time to go window shopping but I didn\'t know about the best TV brands very well. So can you explain about the brands of TV\'s to me? >>>So can you explain about the best TV brands to me? Also I want to buy the new TV set with cash. >>>CORRECT If I buy it with the cash, can you discount? >>>better: If I buy it with cash, can you give a discount? If you can\'t give the discount, I will buy with credit card. >>>If you can\'t give the discount, I will buy with a credit card. I am living in the countryside so can you carry it to my house? >>>I am living in the countryside so can you deliver it to my house? This is last my question. >>>CORRECT When you install them in my house, do you have extra charge? >>>When you install them in my house, do I have to pay an extra charge?

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