3.21 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What would life be like without weekends? Please explain.
If there were no weekends, I will tired every day, and my health to deteriorate and my mind to deteriorate.
Proper rest seems to be very important in life.
강사 첨삭
Absolutely, Toress! You should always try to have work life balance. See you!-Faith-
What would life be like without weekends? Please explain.>> CORRECT
If there were no weekends, I will tired every day, and my health to deteriorate and my mind to deteriorate.
>> If there were no weekends, I would be tired every day, and my physical and mental health would deteriorate.
Proper rest seems to be very important in life.
Proper rest seems to be very important in life.
>> Proper rest seems to be very important in life.
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