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My favorite memory is gathering whole family, and playing game. And with my cousin it is very funny. I remember that when the holiday my whole family is just gathering and talking to recent situation.
When I was young I like to gather whole family, but nowadays it is very annoying.
If it is holiday, it is special thing is rest alone.
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My favorite memory is gathering whole family, and playing game.
>> My favorite memory is getting the entire family together and playing a game.
And with my cousin it is very funny.
>> It\'s especially fun with my cousin.
I remember that when the holiday my whole family is just gathering and talking to recent situation.
>> I remember that during the holidays, my entire family would gather and discuss the most recent events.
When I was young I like to gather whole family, but nowadays it is very annoying.
>> I used to enjoy gatherings with my family when I was younger, but it is now really difficult.
If it is holiday, it is special thing is rest alone.
>> Resting alone on a holiday is a special treat.
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