3.21 Homework

2014-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi ma'am! Good morning! Happy Friday! Homework Compare and Contrast online class. Compared to a traditional class. I prefer online class. Online class is beneficial taking advantage of the time.The time is very important for us. I think online class is effective to study because we might be wasted the moving time. Of course, there are a lot of advantages in the traditional class.In the point of feeling in person,it will be better than online class.But I will choose online class. I think this is the person's taste. Thank you! Have a nice day!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! WOW!! You finished your homework very early today. I\'m so happy because you always alot a time for your this. Stay as diligent as you are Mr. [이름]. Have  a great weekend. ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good morning! Happy Friday!>> Correct.HomeworkCompare and Contrast online class. Compared to a traditional class.I prefer online class. >> Correct.>> I prefer online classes. Online class is beneficial taking advantage of the time. >> Online classes is beneficial for those who dont have much time. The time is very important for us. >> Time is very important to us. I think online class is effective to study because we might be wasted the moving time. >> I think an online class is more effective because we don\'t need to waste our time going to an institute/academy.Of course, there are a lot of advantages in the traditional class. >> Correct.In the point of feeling in person,it will be better than online class. >>**What do you mean by this statement Mr. [이름]? But I will choose online class. >> But I prefer online classes.I think this is the person\'s taste.>> I think it depends on the person\'s preference.Thank you! Have a nice day! >> Correct.        

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