3. 21 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
The most challenging part of my future job-elementary school teacher will be understanding and controlling very younger students. Actually teaching will be not so big problem because I always study hard. But children who have different personalities will act differently and some of them won\'t follow me.
The most rewarding part will be that I can stay with purest people-children. Challengings of every jobs is that people must contact bad adults. But children can\'t be bad like adults.
The most challenging part of my future job-elementary school teacher will be understanding and controlling very young students. Actually teaching will not be so big problem because I always study hard. But children who have different personalities will act differently and some of them won\'t follow me, / might not follow me. The most rewarding part will be, I can be with purest people - children. The challenges of every job is that people must adjust and deal with adults who have different personalities, but children couldn\'t be as bad like adults.
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