3-21th Homework

Hi, [이름]! ^_^

It\'s an awesome Tuesday again to us.

Thank you for once again doing your best to come up with a  good essay.

I\'m always grateful for all of your efforts.

I agree with you when you said the experience that we get in every endeavor we have is very important even if we don\'t achieve our objective/goal.

Maybe it\'s because these experiences help us become a better person.

These experiences are not hindrances but rather a stepping stone for us to achieve success. :)

I hope you\'re doing great at work.

See you again on Thursday.

Take care always.

~Teacher C[이름]

Working or doing something to reach an objective is valuable even if we could not reach at there.

>> Working or doing something to reach an objective is valuable even if we could not reach it.
 During doing something, we can get something that we don\'t recognize before.

>> While doing something, we can get something that we didn\'t recognize before.

OR >> While doing something, we can gain something that we didn\'t recognize before.
 Eventually, we can achieve our own goals through our experience.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We can eventually achieve our own goals through our experience.
So, there is no useless thing in the world.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> So, everything has a purpose in this world.
And there is no useless behavior in your action.

>> [Do you mean]: And there is no such thing as a useless behavior.
Sometimes, we could not get easily the results or rewards promptly.

>> Sometimes, we could not easily get the results or promptly get the rewards we want.
But nobody gets the result that he wants right away.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But no one is able to get the result that he wants right away.
Even if we don\'t get the satisfied results, in the processing we get something, that is, the experience.

>> Even if we don\'t get satisfying results, in the process, we still get something and that is called \'experience\'.
The experience is very important to carry out our own goals.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Experience is essential in carrying out our own goals.
It always conducts a right way.

>> [Do you mean]: It is always conducted in the right way/manner.
But sometimes, there are some errors.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But there are times when errors occur.
I think it is also a valuable present that we can get the reward from the experience.

>> I think it is also a valuable present or reward that we can get from experience.

There is some tricky thing in experience.

>> There is something tricky about experience.
Even if the experience is wrong, someone believe it is right.

>> Even if the experience is wrong, someone may believe that it is right.
So, this failure could be supported and be corrected by the right theory.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But this error/mistake could be supported and be corrected by the right theory.
Anyway, working to reach an objective is good.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Anyhow, doing something to reach an objective is good.