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학생이 쓴 원문
A few years ago, I went camping trip with my family.
This was my first time and my last time because it was very difficult.
So I don't want to go camping trip again.
If I would go camping trip with my family again, I would bring some things.
First, I must bring warm sleeping bag.
In my first time,I didn't bring it so I had to sleep in my car.
Second, I bring a lot of delicous foods because when my family go camping trip, we eat a lot of them.
Last, I bring my cellphone I can listen to music and I can check the weather.
These days the cellphone is very useful.
Anyway I don't want to go camping trip. I don't like it.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
It\'s great that you supported your point with examples. These are common expressions:
1. go camping/ go on a camping trip
examples: I don\'t want to go camping again.
I don\'t want to go on a camping trip again.
2. We often use would to express the so-called second and third conditionals:
examples:
If he lost his job he would have no money.
If I had won the lottery I would have bought a car.
Teacher Venus^^
A few years ago, I went camping trip with my family.
>>>A few years ago, I went on a camping trip with my family.
This was my first time and my last time because it was very difficult.
>>>CORRECT
So I don\'t want to go camping trip again.
>>>So I don\'t want to go camping again.
If I would go camping trip with my family again, I would bring some things.
>>>If I went camping with my family again, I would bring some things.First, I must bring warm sleeping bag.
>>>First, I must bring a warm sleeping bag.
In my first time,I didn\'t bring it so I had to sleep in my car.
>>>In my first camping trip,I didn\'t bring it so I had to sleep in my car.
Second, I bring a lot of delicous foods because when my family go camping trip, we eat a lot of them.
>>>Second, I\'d bring a lot of delicious foods because we eat a lot of them.
Last, I bring my cellphone I can listen to music and I can check the weather.
>>>Last, I\'d bring my cellphone so I can listen to music and I can check the weather.
These days the cellphone is very useful.
>>>CORRECT
Anyway I don\'t want to go camping trip.
>>>Anyway I don\'t want to go on a camping trip.
I don\'t like it.
>>>CORRECT
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