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2023-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kristine

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I like french food. Especially I love french desserts. Mille-feuille and Croissant look so delicious. When I watched tv program that french desserts, I really wanted to going there.

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French dishes often use simple ingredients transformed by artful techniques. Fresh, naturally produced ingredients can always be found in French cuisine. Wine, cheese, olive oil, and seasonal vegetables are just a few staples. It\'s so tasty!

- Kristine ^^

I like french food.

>> I enjoy French cuisine.
Especially I love french desserts.

>> I particularly love French desserts.
Mille-feuille and Croissant look so delicious.

>> Croissants and mille-feuille are both taste fantastic.
When I watched tv program that french desserts, I really wanted to going there.

>> I would really want to visit France after watching a television program about French pastries.

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