3.22 homework
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강사 첨삭
Thank you for your homework, Ye [이름]!
Just keep expressing your thoughts and you\'ll be great in English.
-Hanna ^^
I want to go on a summer vacation trip.
>>Correct
If I have a dating with someone, I want to go with them.
>>If I am dating someone, I will go with him.
And I want to travel Singapore.
>>Correct
Because it is safe to travel alone, and it is very clear the street, and also they are many various country people in there.
>>The clear streets of Singapore makes it a safe place to travel when you are alone and you can see various people too.
So I want to go there in summer.
>>I want to go there during summer.
If the weather is winter I want to go to Thailand.
>>During winter, I would want to go to Thailand.
Because Korea winter is very cold.
>>Because in Korea, winter season is very cold.
So I want to enjoy summer other country.
>>So I would like to enjoy the summer season in other countries.
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