3.22 homework

2023-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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I want to go on a summer vacation trip. If I have a dating with someone, I want to go with them. And I want to travel Singapore. Because it is safe to travel alone, and it is very clear the street, and also they are many various country people in there. So I want to go there in summer. If the weather is winter I want to go to Thailand. Because Korea winter is very cold. So I want to enjoy summer other country.

강사 첨삭

 

Thank you for your homework, Ye [이름]!

Just keep expressing your thoughts and you\'ll be great in English.

-Hanna ^^

I want to go on a summer vacation trip. 

>>Correct

If I have a dating with someone, I want to go with them.

>>If I am dating someone, I will go with him.
And I want to travel Singapore.

>>Correct

 Because it is safe to travel alone, and it is very clear the street, and also they are many various country people in there. 

>>The clear streets of Singapore makes it a safe place to travel when you are alone and you can see various people too.

So I want to go there in summer. 

>>I want to go there during summer.

If the weather is winter I want to go to Thailand. 

>>During winter, I would want to go to Thailand.

Because Korea winter is very cold. 

>>Because in Korea, winter season is very cold.

So I want to enjoy summer other country.

>>So I would like to enjoy the summer season in other countries.


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