3/22 homework

2018-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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[ About the movie that inspired me ] If someone ask to me what is your favorite movie, I always answer 'notebook'. It is story for a couple. The husband love his wife a lot even she have Alzheimer disease. Everyday he talk to her about their love story like novel. Everyone become old, even my husband and me. I thought about the most important thing in our life during the movie. It's family or love. If I lost all money or honor, maybe all people around me will go away from me. However, If I have sincere relation with my husband, he will remain beyond me. I also will do like that to him.

강사 첨삭

I also love the movie [이름]!

As a matter of fact, even though I have watched it several times, I still can\'t get enough of it. C\")

Anyway, thanks a lot for your effort. See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


[ About the movie that inspired me ]

If someone ask to me what is your favorite movie, I always answer \'notebook\'.

>>> When someone asks me what my favorite movie is, I always answer \"The Notebook.\"
 It is story for a couple.

>>> It is a story about a couple.
 The husband love his wife a lot even she have Alzheimer disease.

>>> The husband loves his wife a lot even when she had Alzheimer\'s disease.
 Everyday he talk to her about their love story like novel.

>>> Every day, he talked to her about their love story like a novel.
 Everyone become old, even my husband and me. 

>>> Everyone becomes old, even my husband and I.
 I thought about the most important thing in our life during the movie. 

>>> Correct!
 It\'s family or love.

>>> Correct!
 If I lost all money or honor, maybe all people around me will go away from me. 

>>> If I entirely lost my wealth or honor, maybe all people around me will turn their back on me.
 However, If I have sincere relation with my husband, he will remain beyond me.

>>> However if I have a sincere relationship with my husband, he will remain beside me.
 I also will do like that to him.

>>> I will also be like that to him.

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