3/22 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I also love the movie [이름]!
As a matter of fact, even though I have watched it several times, I still can\'t get enough of it. C\")
Anyway, thanks a lot for your effort. See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
[ About the movie that inspired me ]
If someone ask to me what is your favorite movie, I always answer \'notebook\'.
>>> When someone asks me what my favorite movie is, I always answer \"The Notebook.\"
It is story for a couple.
>>> It is a story about a couple.
The husband love his wife a lot even she have Alzheimer disease.
>>> The husband loves his wife a lot even when she had Alzheimer\'s disease.
Everyday he talk to her about their love story like novel.
>>> Every day, he talked to her about their love story like a novel.
Everyone become old, even my husband and me.
>>> Everyone becomes old, even my husband and I.
I thought about the most important thing in our life during the movie.
>>> Correct!
It\'s family or love.
>>> Correct!
If I lost all money or honor, maybe all people around me will go away from me.
>>> If I entirely lost my wealth or honor, maybe all people around me will turn their back on me.
However, If I have sincere relation with my husband, he will remain beyond me.
>>> However if I have a sincere relationship with my husband, he will remain beside me.
I also will do like that to him.
>>> I will also be like that to him.
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