3-22th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Happy Friday again. ^^
Thank you very much for taking the time to write in our composition board today.
You have great sentences and insights.
I agree that even though the buyers or consumers don\'t own the company, they are still the real boss because they are the ones consuming the product or receiving the service.
If they are not satisfied with the service or the product, they will not patronize it resulting to the bankruptcy of a company.
Anyhow, that is my opinion in relation to this matter.
I hope you are having a great day.
Enjoy your Christmas celebration with your family.
I\'ll see you on Monday.
Take care.
~Teacher C[이름] :)
The customer is really the boss.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It is true that the customer is the real boss.
It\'s because the customer pay something for some service or some goods.
>> It\'s because the customer pays something for some services or some goods.
Actually, he or she may dislike to pay for the provided services, if he or she doesn\'t satisfy with it.
>> Actually, he or she may dislike to pay for the provided services, if he or she isn\'t satisfied with it.
But in the case of the example of this question, it is very extraordinary.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> However, the example of this question is very extraordinary.
Even if the member makes an mistake to the customer, the customer doesn\'t have the ability to fire the member.
>> Even if the employee makes a mistake to the customer, the customer doesn\'t have the ability to fire the employee.
Since the customer is not an owner, it is impossible.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Since the customer does not own the company, it is impossible.
If there are some mistakes, it is a role of the company but it is not that of the customer.
>> If there are some mistakes, it is the role of the company to correct it and not that of the customer.
And firing the member is not a simple problem.
>> And firing the employee is not a simple problem.
But firing the member by the customer is not rare, it\'s because we live in the capitalism era.
>> But firing the employee by the customer is not rare. It\'s because we live in the capitalistic era.
We can live the era if we must get the money.
>> We have to live in this era if we must get/earn money.
So, the rich behave like a king and we just serve them to get their money.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That\'s why the rich behave like a king and we just serve them to get their money.
It\'s very a pity.
>> It\'s very a pitiful.
But since we live in the capitalism era, we have to do like this.
>> But since we live in the capitalistic era, we have to do things like this.
OR >> But since we live in the capitalistic era, we have to do things this way.
However, the customer who has a lot of money is just a person like me.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> On the other hand, the customer who has a lot of money is just a person like me.
And also we have to live with them.
>> And we also have to live with them.
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