3.23 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What activities would you like to do with your son in the Philippines?
I want to go to the hopping tour with my son and want to swimming together.
I want to make feel my son that swimming in the middle of the sea.
강사 첨삭
That is an amazing plan, Toress! Your plan also makes me feel excited for you and your son. May all your plans become true!-Faith-
What activities would you like to do with your son in the Philippines?>> CORRECT
I want to go to the hopping tour with my son and want to swimming together.
>> I want to go on an island hopping tour with my son and want us to go swimming together.
I want to make feel my son that swimming in the middle of the sea.
I want to make feel my son that swimming in the middle of the sea.
>> I want my son to know how it feels like to swim in the middle of the sea.
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