3. 23 Homework

2018-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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* Writing Task * Do athletes deserve the high salaries they receive? Why or why not? I think they deserve the high salaries. Because among many people, only very few people can succeed as athletes. I think that difficult challenge must be paid highly. And athlete isn't a stable job. If they have some trobles in their body, they can't earn money. So I think succeeded athletes deserve the high salaries.

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I think they deserve the high salaries. Because among many people, only very few people can succeed as athletes. I think that difficult challenge must be paid highly. And athlete isn\'t a stable job. If they have some trobles in their body, they can\'t earn money. So I think succeeded athletes deserve the high salaries.

I think they deserve the high salaries. Because among other people, only few can succeed as athletes. I think difficult challenges must be paid highly. Being an athlete is not a stable job also. If they have some troubles in their bodies they can\'t earn money. So I think successful athletes deserve high salaries.

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