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2020-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

학생이 쓴 원문

I never think about it. But, if I can not pregnant, I will consider that. I remember that one of my friends had a new baby when she was a high school student. Her parents adopted a baby. I don\'t know the detail, but it was very strange to me because she had a younger brother and four people family is very common in Korea. Anyway, their family looked very happy and the adopted baby also grew very well. I thought that only people who can not pregnant think about adoption, but it is not. Angelina Jolie adopted three babies and she gave birth to three children. Perhaps people have different views on adoption. We say \'adoption is the birth of a child with a heart\'. Some people say that it is better to adopt than pregnant because there are many abandoned children. I think that adoption is a good thing to be encouraged by people, but it is not wrong to not adopt. And parents who are not ready should not adopt. I want to try to pregnant naturally with my husband once.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], 
Thanks for your prompt reply to the homework you were given homework:) Although you haven\'t thought about this topic, you still came up with a good response, so that is really great!
-Rachel
I never think about it.
>> I never thought about it. 
But, if I can not pregnant, I will consider that.
>> But if I cannot get pregnant, I will consider that. 
I remember that one of my friends had a new baby when she was a high school student. Her parents adopted a baby.
>> correct 
I don\'t know the detail, but it was very strange to me because she had a younger brother and \'four people\' family is very common in Korea.
>> correct
Anyway, their family looked very happy and the adopted baby also grew very well.
>> correct (awesome)
I thought that only people who can not pregnant think about adoption, but it is not.
>> correct
Angelina Jolie adopted three babies and she gave birth to three children.
>> correct
Perhaps people have different views on adoption. We say \'adoption is the birth of a child with a heart\'.
>> correct
Some people say that it is better to adopt than pregnant because there are many abandoned children.
>> correct (we just add get before pregnant- get pregnant)
I think that adoption is a good thing to be encouraged by people, but it is not wrong to not adopt.
>> correct 
And parents who are not ready should not adopt.
I want to try to get pregnant naturally with my husband once.
>> correct 

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